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写英语作文必须依靠逻辑思维,使用自己的思辨能力认知能力,同时用英语的逻辑思维的四种方式:一因一果;一因多果;多因一果;多因多果。这样把“提出问题,解决问题”做到位,才能符合英语思维之要求。为此可以帮助学习英语写作起点学生,我的一个小学生写出英语作文——以“这将是个美好的夏天(It is going to be a beautiful-summer holiday)”为题,写英语作文如下。

实战英语作文如下。

It is going to be a beautiful-summer holiday

Lily, I am one of pupils in a primary school. Before the summer holiday, my teacher asks my classmate, everyone, to finish doing homework and plan to do what is interesting to most of them in the holiday. Here is my homework for all of pupils.

There is the homework doing possibly in summer holiday as follows. Outdoor sports are interesting to most pupils. For example, they ride bicycle, play football and basketball and do some swimming in a swimming pool in summer when Summer is hotter than any other seasons. Some of them are trying to learn how to dance, draw pictures and make handicrafts.

Sometimes they can go on a trip to sightseeing and interesting places at home and abroad. Someone will be happy to visit museums, zoo. They enjoy having picnic or doing a good day out at the seaside. One pupil together with another would like to read their favourite storybooks in a library to help them with knowledge and open their mind.

Without doing these, some are trying to learn a lot from their parents about how to cook meal well. This makes them to learn knowledge and develop independently and coopertatively. In the evening, pupils together with their parent have a lot of fun seeing a film or playing electric game.

They also have time to take music, or dance and or a foreign language as a new hobby. Please remember to join junior team in summer camp or friend-making meeting. This helps pupils be good at sharing social skills in a spirit of teamwork.

上述英语作文大意如下:

这将是个美好的夏天

我是莉莉,是一名小学生。暑假之前,我的老师要求同学们,每一个人都要完成一项作业写一个你在暑假里最感兴趣的事情计划。现在我为所有同学写计划如下。

暑假能做户外运动,对大多数同学来说都是感兴趣的,例如骑自行车、踢足球、打篮球和炎热夏天在游泳池里游泳。

也有一些同学可以努力学习如何跳舞、画画、做手工艺品。有时候他们去国内外旅游参观名胜古迹一些地方。一些同学将非常高兴去参观博物馆、动物园。他们还可以很高兴吃野餐,在海边玩儿一天。有时候一个跟另一同学去图书馆里读一些受他们欢迎的故事书。如此帮助他们学习知识,开阔视野。

如果不做这些个事情呢,他们要努力跟他们父母学习如何做饭的很多的知识。这能培养他们的独立合作精神。晚上呢,学生们跟他们的父母可以很高兴地看电影、打电子游戏呀,因此增进家庭成员之间的感情。

他们可以有时间把音乐、跳舞和一门外语,当做一种特长爱好。请记住在暑假里加入社交活动,参加夏令营、交友会等。因此可以帮助学生们很好的分享社交能力和团队合作精神。

总结:

这篇英语作文会提出问题、会解决问题,确实是达到了符合英语逻辑思维的要求。例如,用英语表述自己假期真实的想法以及靠小学生的叙述能力、思维能力、认知能力,来阐述——“这将是个美好的夏天(It is going to be a beautiful-summer holiday)”为题,写英语作文——的自己观点。而且提出自己真实的想法通过实战英语写作主题,得到验证。这必然带来令人惊讶的结果:英语写作好便必然带来英语单选、完形填空、造句、阅读理解回答问题,提档次升分数。分数高于中考生成绩的小学生写英语作文实战文,令人刮目相看。

为此想了解上述英语作文是怎么写作出来的小学高年级学生、及初中生或其家长,有意在实践上的练习训练操作方面,需要要进一步了解者,请私信留言。